Thank You!

WOW WOW WOW! I am blown away by your thoughtfulness and generosity. Thank you SO much for the BEST Hanukkah gifts I’ll receive this year- I’m sure of it! You clearly know me well… coffee and a spa day…my dream come true! I can’t wait to drink all of the coffee over break! 

It has been wonderful getting to know your children over the past few months. Your continued support and open and honest communication have been so valuable. I am looking forward to the second half of the year – I know it will be amazing!

I hope you have a healthy, happy and safe winter break! Happy new year!!

Gev. Kimmel 

 

 

Memoirs are Published! 5th ELA

We celebrated publishing our memoirs yesterday by inviting teachers, staff, and seventh & eighth graders to listen to our work. It was a beautiful way to take pride in and share our work.

Many of the students shared their pride by talking about what they learned about the writing process, how they’ve grown as writers, and how surprised they were about needing to make multiple drafts before feeling totally ready to say, “I’m done.” 

Every student grew dramatically through this writing process. Please know that published drafts in fifth grade are NOT “perfect” examples of writing. Because each student has different needs, your child may have focused on adding detail while another student may have focused on punctuating dialogue and integrating more complex punctuation. In fifth grade we don’t work on every single writing skill at once, we choose the highest priority for each student. 

I am so proud of their work and I know you will be too! They are taking home their work today, please make sure to have them share it with you!

 

After break we will dive into biography writing and non-fiction reading! 

 

 

 

Editing our Memoirs! 5th ELA

Everyone is officially in the revising and editing stages of writing! Many students had questions about how/when to use commas. We went over and practiced eight different ways to use them in our writing and then took a look back at our memoirs– checking for correct comma usage. We are hoping to publish and share our writing by the end of next week!

 

Punctuating Dialogue – 5th ELA

In revising our memoirs, it became very apparent that everyone needed a review on how to properly punctuate dialogue in writing. So, this week’s Word Work Wednesday was dedicated to just that! We reviewed the three forms of dialogue tags and how to properly use quotes, commas, end marks and capital letters.

Then the kids were able to practice this with partners and eventually go back to their own writing. First they checked to see if they had even included dialogue, an important aspect of memoir,  and then checked for correct usage of punctuation. 

This lesson also led to a great conversation about the word, “said,” and how if overused, it could make writing really boring. We generated an entire list of words we could use instead!

 

I reminded the class that writing has SO many rules that I never expect them to memorize or master them all – but that we will review the rules, put tools in our binders, and refer back to them when we need them! 

Types of Characters in Fiction – 5th ELA

Just like in real life, different characters can add a range of emotions and experiences to a text. This week we talked about the importance of a variety of character types in literature. We reviewed how to think about characters- through their words, actions and thoughts- and how to document evidence that supports their development, or lack of development throughout a story. 

After two mini lessons, students had the chance to practice identifying different characters in a variety of picture books. It was a really wonderful opportunity to practice our close reading skills, pulling out evidence specifically from the text to support our thinking. 

After using a graphic organizer to support character analysis, the kids now understand how they can write about character types, traits and evolution in their thinking journals.