When we got to city hall we ate sandwiches with cheese and other things on it, but I only ate it with cheese. Before the mayor talked there other people talked, so when the mayor finally went up, he talked about Israel and a bunch of other things. I actually met the mayor and shook his hand. After that, we played an IMPOSSIBLE activity. Then we went back to school. yay.
This is good, but I think that next time you could check for spelling and add more details.
Ok, I will make sure to do that.
I liked how you said what you ate
Thank you, this comment was really helpful